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mohana
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i want to write but i don't know how continue the story
:rolleyessmileyanim:
so
i read your story
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reza.n
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now add it again to the body of the story
parnian24
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do you mean :as you know:instead of:just that you know?by the way just that u know.it is raining here.so coool.
now continue the storyh34r-smiley:
what does mean:its raining here?
mohana
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mohana
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The night was still young when she reached to the top of the cliff.she was facing the full moon glowing its rays to trees and bushes .it was a quiet night and the sound of silence made the jungle look like a lifeless soul sucking monster.she couldn't see a thing through that darkness.suddenly she felt a movement behind.she felt frozen...she looked back apprehensively...sth was lurking in bushes... she wasnt brave enough to encounter any danger... so the only way was running... running as fast as she could.but her feet were frozen,she didn't have enough ability to return ,then she heard a weak noise too,that was like the sound of man in pain.,.
she said i must be powerful" so she tracked the noise ,oh my God ,he was."
a young man there,lying on the grass.blood was all over his body and face.she could feel the coldness more than ever in her veins."what could have done that?"she said.young man took his last breath
Oh no, I have to help. how can i help him,
she thought.the man rolled his eyes and looked at her ,he was still alive ,so she decided to help him,
I should end his blood??... ."
she saw his arm injured
" what can i do?"
she said
so
she should fasten a panel around of his arm
:smiliess (10)::smiliess (10)::smiliess (10):
she said i must be powerful" so she tracked the noise ,oh my God ,he was."
a young man there,lying on the grass.blood was all over his body and face.she could feel the coldness more than ever in her veins."what could have done that?"she said.young man took his last breath
Oh no, I have to help. how can i help him,
she thought.the man rolled his eyes and looked at her ,he was still alive ,so she decided to help him,
I should end his blood??... ."
she saw his arm injured
" what can i do?"
she said
so
she should fasten a panel around of his arm
:smiliess (10)::smiliess (10)::smiliess (10):
Hamidvet
New member
i would like to participate in this topic but
i don't know what time are u here?????:dadad4:
...........I have complained
I'm agree with leyla-h opinion/complaint!
All day long we are looking for the topic to come up and participate in, with jolly friends, but nobody is coming!
I think you're like Owls; You're night-workers!!
Anyway, I'm going to join your discussion about that horrible story ...
Hamidvet
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The night was still young when she reached to the top of the cliff.she was facing the full moon glowing its rays to trees and bushes .it was a quiet night and the sound of silence made the jungle look like a lifeless soul sucking monster.she couldn't see a thing through that darkness.suddenly she felt a movement behind ...
She was terrified; Leaped behind a tree and sat down, in the shining of the moon she could recognize just the origin of that sound ... it was a man roaming there , seeking a young virgin to take her with himself to the castle;...
She was terrified; Leaped behind a tree and sat down, in the shining of the moon she could recognize just the origin of that sound ... it was a man roaming there , seeking a young virgin to take her with himself to the castle;...
susan90
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reza.n
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i meant:in case u know,it is raining here.ok?it was a non related comment but i just wanted to say.(اون لحظه دیشب بارون میبارید خواستم بگم فقط بهتون).:auizz3ffy9vla57584x
reza.n
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BUT that man must live,
reza.n
New member
The night was still young when she reached to the top of the cliff.she was facing the full moon glowing its rays to trees and bushes .it was a quiet night and the sound of silence made the jungle look like a lifeless soul sucking monster.she couldn't see a thing through that darkness.suddenly she felt a movement behind.she felt frozen...she looked back apprehensively...sth was lurking in bushes... she wasnt brave enough to encounter any danger... so the only way was running... running as fast as she could.but her feet were frozen,she didn't have enough ability to return ,then she heard a weak noise too,that was like the sound of man in pain.,.
she said i must be powerful" so she tracked the noise ,oh my God ,he was."
a young man there,lying on the grass.blood was all over his body and face.she could feel the coldness more than ever in her veins."what could have done that?"she said.young man took his last breath
Oh no, I have to help. how can i help him,
she thought.the man rolled his eyes and looked at her ,he was still alive ,so she decided to help him,
I should end his blood??... ."
she saw his arm was injured
" what can i do?"
she said
so
she thought of a way to stop the bleeding.she fasten a Bandage around his arm
:smiliess (10) (10)::smiliess (10):
:auizz3ffy9vla57584x
reza.n
New member
well i'm new in this topic too.so i honestly donno .
i would like to participate in this topic but
i don't know what time u are here?????:dadad4:
...........I have complained
reza.n
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owls:25r30wi:.yeah i think we are
reza.n
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dear friend,u should continue with other guys senteces.ok?not to start over the story